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01 獨(dú)立口語
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Schools should spend as much time teaching students about world history as they do teaching students about the history of their own countries. Use examples and details to explain your answer. (重復(fù)2023.8.29)
思路解析
答法一:學(xué)習(xí)世界歷史
可以學(xué)習(xí)不同的文化,拓寬視野——如果我們學(xué)習(xí)了世界歷史,可以了解不同國(guó)家的文化,學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)?shù)氐奈幕?,包括語言,宗教,風(fēng)俗等等不同的文化內(nèi)涵,幫助我們拓展自己的知識(shí)面,豐富自己的視野。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞
to learn different cultures / to broaden our horizon; dialect, accent, religion, knowledge, culture diversity
增強(qiáng)文化同理心,更加客觀地看待問題——學(xué)習(xí)世界歷史可以了解不同國(guó)家在不同階段發(fā)生的故事,更好地理解當(dāng)?shù)匚幕热缈吹揭恍﹪?guó)際實(shí)時(shí)新聞,能夠更加客觀地看待這些問題。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞
to be more tolerant to accept different history and cultures / to have more empathy / to analyze an issue more critically,international issue, trending topics, the most popular hashtags
答法二:只學(xué)習(xí)本國(guó)文化
可以更好地傳承和宣揚(yáng)本國(guó)文化——通過學(xué)習(xí)本國(guó)歷史,文化得到很好地傳承,尤其是中國(guó)有著幾千年的歷史文化,通過學(xué)習(xí)歷史可以更好地了解本國(guó)。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞
inherit
advocate
to have a better understand of
增加民眾的文化身份認(rèn)同感——通過學(xué)習(xí)本國(guó)歷史,可以增強(qiáng)學(xué)生或民眾對(duì)于本國(guó)文化地認(rèn)可度和文化自信。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞
to form own culture identity / cultural recognition;to build up culture confidence
02 學(xué)術(shù)討論寫作
你認(rèn)為征收稅收和罰款是阻止公司破壞環(huán)境的好方法嗎? (重復(fù)2023.8.26)
Many companies provide important products and services but at the same time cause environmental damage. Some people believe the way to prevent these companies from damaging the environment is for the government to require more penalties from them, such as higher taxes and larger fines. Do you think it is a good idea?
Andrew:
A lot of companies make helpful products but hurt the environment too. I think the government should punish them more, like raising their taxes and fines, to stop the damage. Doing that would hold corporations accountable and force them to change in an impactful way. We can have both innovation and sustainability if governments incentivize it properly through penalties.
Claire:
I disagree that we should penalize corporations more for environmental damage. Many companies are already taking steps to adopt greener practices, and higher taxes or fines could discourage innovation and hurt the economy. Instead of punishing businesses, I think the government should reward and incentivize sustainable choices through subsidies and tax breaks.
思路解析
1.看完題目后,挑選出兩位同學(xué)中可以回應(yīng)的各一句話/一個(gè)點(diǎn):
Andrew--Doing that would hold corporations accountable and force them to change in an impactful way.
Claire--higher taxes or fines could discourage innovation and hurt the economy.
2. 對(duì)應(yīng)各自內(nèi)容進(jìn)行延伸/反駁:
反駁Andrew的思路--該行為不一定會(huì)讓公司負(fù)責(zé)或做出改變 -> 公司可能會(huì)漲價(jià) -> 有損消費(fèi)者的利益
延伸Claire的思路:其它缺點(diǎn)——高稅收還可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致逃稅等違法行為
3. 例子,對(duì)應(yīng)延伸或反駁的內(nèi)容其中之一去舉例
對(duì)應(yīng)“反駁Andrew的內(nèi)容”:
例子的中心思想——公司為了環(huán)保而漲價(jià)。
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