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01獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)
2023年12月16日：
People should only engage in activities or hobbies they are good at or talented in.
思路解析
答法一：agree
理由①：如果他們?cè)谶@一方面有天賦的話，會(huì)表現(xiàn)得更好，產(chǎn)出更多的結(jié)果——比如效率更高，能夠快速地習(xí)得一項(xiàng)技能。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
to have a better performance; to yield good returns; to have a higher efficiency while they are involved in the acitivities; skill acquisition/to acquire a skill faster；
理由②：因?yàn)樯瞄L(zhǎng)所以會(huì)讓學(xué)生們更加自信，更加有興趣，做起來(lái)更加有動(dòng)力，更加輕松。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
to have motivation and passion; There is a driving force/Talents are incentive and essential to drive people to... ; to be more confident and inspiring.
答法二：disagree
理由①：如果參加一些自己不擅長(zhǎng)的活動(dòng)，可以學(xué)習(xí)拓寬自己的知識(shí)面、學(xué)習(xí)新事物、離開(kāi)自己的舒適區(qū)。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
to broaden our knowledge/horizon; to improve our cognitive level; to think outside the box/to get out of your comfort zone
理由②：可以培養(yǎng)自己不同的能力和品格——比如忍耐力和勇氣，毅力，即使我不擅長(zhǎng)這個(gè)活動(dòng)但是我也可以做好。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
to develop various abilities and characters, such as endurance, courage and perseverance; I can also do it well while I am facing with the challenge.
2023年12月17日：
It is better for students to live with a roommate who is studying the same subject.
思路解析
答法一：agree
理由①：可以互相幫助，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率——如果室友自己上類(lèi)似的課程，那么當(dāng)在作業(yè)中碰到問(wèn)題時(shí)，可以互相詢(xún)問(wèn)，而不是一個(gè)人在晚上查資料。
理由②：有助于增進(jìn)友誼——如果室友和自己上相同的課程，那么我們會(huì)有更多一起相處的時(shí)間，比如一起拼車(chē)上課，或者一起去圖書(shū)館學(xué)習(xí)等。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
help each other, offer assistance, efficiency, similar courses, major in the same area, come across, instead, spend more time together, share a car-ride.
答法二：disagree
理由①：會(huì)產(chǎn)生心理壓力——如果室友和自己上同樣的課程，當(dāng)我們發(fā)現(xiàn)對(duì)方的成績(jī)比自己高時(shí)，可能會(huì)產(chǎn)生焦慮的情緒，導(dǎo)致內(nèi)卷。
理由②：如果室友和自己上的課不一樣，我們可以學(xué)到更多知識(shí)——如果我上的是工程類(lèi)課程，而我的室友都是藝術(shù)類(lèi)課程，那我可以在和室友的相處中接觸我上課時(shí)接觸不到知識(shí)。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
mental pressure, rat race, academic performance, anxiety, unease, engineering, artsy, get in touch with, get hold of, otherwise impossible to do.
02 學(xué)術(shù)討論寫(xiě)作
2023年12月16日：
Dr. Achebe
Let's think about population trends in urban and rural areas (villages). Living in urban areas can be expensive; nonetheless, when they have a choice of where to live, people in some countries do not wish to live in rural areas even if the cost of living there is lower. If governments of some countries want to attract more people to live in rural areas or villages, what is the best strategy or approach that governments can use? Why?
Claire
I would live in a rural area if the government gave more financial help to farmers. Although it may cost very little to live in a rural area, it costs a lot to begin a career in agriculture. If I had financial help, I would start my own farm and be happy to live in a rural area.
Kelly
In my country, urban centers are great places to live because you can access shops, restaurants, and museums. If the government of my country wanted to attract me to live in a rural area, the area would first have to attract more businesses focused on entertainment and culture than most rural areas have now.
思路解析
1. 看完題目后，排除兩位同學(xué)已選擇的大方向，確定自己新的立場(chǎng)：改善公共交通。
2. 詳細(xì)展開(kāi)：
公共交通更便利 -> 減少通勤時(shí)間 -> 由于生活成本更低，同等出行時(shí)間內(nèi)更遠(yuǎn)的鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)會(huì)被考慮到 -> 鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)會(huì)有更多人。
3. 例子：對(duì)應(yīng)上一步詳細(xì)展開(kāi)的內(nèi)容去舉例
eg. 此處例子可參考以下關(guān)鍵詞，再按合適的思路、順序組織內(nèi)容即可：
某人本來(lái)考慮租房的價(jià)格&走路去工作的時(shí)長(zhǎng)、在更遠(yuǎn)的地方租房的花費(fèi)&坐地鐵/公交的時(shí)長(zhǎng)。
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