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12月6日托?？荚?，獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)話題重復(fù)11月11日的考題、寫作是關(guān)于“慈善”的一套新題，整體難度還是不低，一起來(lái)看看老師們的思路分析！
托福口語(yǔ)和寫作都需要長(zhǎng)期持續(xù)的練習(xí)，此系列文將持續(xù)為大家分享后續(xù)每場(chǎng)托?？荚嚨莫?dú)立口語(yǔ)備考思路解析及寫作部分的參考范文。
01 獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)
重復(fù)2023.11.11
Do you think that parents should read their children's emails or text messages without their permission? Explain why.
思路解析
答法一：
Parents should read without permission
理由①：避免不良信息的傳播——舉例郵件和短信中可能包含一些垃圾郵件，如詐騙虛假信息；青少年思想還尚未成熟，很有可能會(huì)被誤導(dǎo)做一些傷害自身隱私事情：上傳ID, 人臉照片，密碼，家庭住址，未來(lái)很可能會(huì)有被濫用的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
理由②：很有必要限制email/text的時(shí)間——由于一些孩子可能無(wú)意識(shí)地花很多時(shí)間和好朋友聊天，這會(huì)干擾到他們正常的時(shí)間安排：學(xué)習(xí)，作息等，甚至傷害視力。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
avoid the spread of vicious information, spams,
Not mentally mature enough, upload the ID number,
Limit the time of emailing/texting, hurt the eyesight
答法二：
Parents should not read without permission
理由①：傷害孩子隱私——因?yàn)楹⒆觽冊(cè)诙绦胖袝?huì)和好朋友們分享日常生活：如，校園趣事，人際關(guān)系，甚至八卦，這都是很正常的聊天社交，然而家長(zhǎng)的直接查看會(huì)讓孩子們覺(jué)得家長(zhǎng)不信任他們，控制欲很強(qiáng)， 沒(méi)有自由。
理由②：不適合長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展——因?yàn)榧议L(zhǎng)不可能一輩子永遠(yuǎn)保護(hù)孩子，管理所有信息，孩子們應(yīng)該逐漸培養(yǎng)自我獨(dú)立性，能夠靠自己分辨信息正誤。
表達(dá)關(guān)鍵詞：
harm the privacy, share their daily life, normal socialization in campus life
Too bossy/controlling, not good for long-term development
Develop independent thinking, judge right from wrong
02 學(xué)術(shù)討論寫作
Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor's question.
In your response, you should do the following.
Express and support your opinion.
Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Doctor
In our discussion about the significance of personal efforts towards charitable donations,which approach do you believe is more effective: donating to local charities or international organizations? Share your opinion and provide reasons for your choice.
Andrew:
In my view, donating to local charities is a more effective way to make a positive impact.Local charities often have a deep understanding of the specific needs and challenges within their communities. When we donate to them, our contributions can be targeted towards addressing immediate and pressing issues, such as hunger, homelessness, or education.
Claire:
I believe that donating to international organizations is a more effective approach. While local charities are essential for addressing immediate community needs, international organizations have the capacity to tackle global challenges on a larger scale. They can address issues like climate change, global health crises, and poverty alleviation in a more comprehensive manner Moreover, international organizations often have the resources and expertise to coordinate efforts across borders, making it possible to address systemic issues that affect people worldwide.
思路解析
題目類型：觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立
支持：Andrew
論述邏輯：
捐贈(zèng)本地的慈善機(jī)構(gòu)---容易監(jiān)督使用情況---給予慈善機(jī)構(gòu)更多的動(dòng)力去改進(jìn)本地的狀況--更多人看到好的結(jié)果---愿意去跟進(jìn)捐贈(zèng)---促進(jìn)良性循環(huán)
Donate to local charities---Easy to monitor usage---Give charities more motivation to improve local conditions---More people see good results---Be willing to follow up on donations---Promote virtuous circle
參考范文
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